Friday, 29 August 2014

A science fiction short story about time travel by David Tombale: The only girl


The only girl

 

 

Jeremy realized that his father had been right to banish him from their spaceship though it pissed him off that he’d had to come all the way to this gods’ forsaken century.

 

 He couldn’t believe that this is what passed for entertainment in this era. This strange gold painted idiot in a top hat had been making odd poses all day as Jeremy sat on a park bench watching him.

 

 He’d just made up his mind to drag the fool into an alley and shoot him when she showed up. Jeremy couldn’t believe his eyes. She looked like his Emily. The same fair skin, the same ash brown hair and that way Emily had about her that drew everyone’s attention without demanding it.

 

 He knew he’d be breaking the rules but Jeremy got to his feet almost in a trance and walked right up to her while she continued watching the ridiculous robot performer. He stepped up right next to her shoulder and she turned to look at him.

 

 Jeremy had had his doubts about this next part. He’d thought all Cassandra’s talk of reincarnation and fate was absolute rubbish but then their eyes met. The girl’s eyes widened in an instant of recognition then clouded over with confusion.

 

“Hi,” Jeremy said.

 

“Hi,” the girl replied smiling uncertainly.

 

“Come here often?” he asked her.

 

 The girl laughed breaking the tension between them. “Oh come on, is that really the best line you could come up with?”

 

Jeremy smiled, his gray eyes lighting up with amusement. “No but then you laughed right? That means my plan was a success.”

 

 “So your plan was to make me laugh?” she asked pulling a strand of hair back behind her ear.

 

“Absolutely,” Jeremy offered her his hand, “I’m Jeremy, Jeremy Tanner.”

 

 “How formal,” she said shaking hands with him, “Rachel, Rachel Crisp.”

 

 “So Rachel Crisp, would you like to get a cup of coffee? I know this great place just around the corner,” he said.

 

“I don’t know,” she said, getting a little nervous. She’d just met the guy and while he was cute and funny she didn’t know anything about him. Still there was something so familiar about Jeremy.

 

“Rachel I would really like to buy you a cup of coffee. If it helps I promise you can skip out the minute you get an odd vibe from me. Deal?”

 

She searched his eyes for a long moment but found only attraction and humor staring back at her. “Okay, but just one.”

 

 “Fair enough.”

 

They started walking away from the street performer but Jeremy spared him one last glance. He was glad they didn’t have any of these morons back home and if things went well within the next few days he would finally be able to leave.

 

 Jeremy fell in on Rachel’s left and while making small talk with her he wondered how he’d convince her to come with him. How would he be able to convince her that his Emily would die without her bone marrow?

 

 Jeremy Tanner bumped shoulders with his wife’s ancestor and saw the need he knew he could exploit in the way she looked at him.

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